Sunday, April 01, 2007

إذا ذهبت بعيدا
ماذا ستأخذ معك

ذكريات الطفولة
...و مرحها
و الحرية المكفولة ؟

و إذا رحلت بعيدا
ماذا سيتبقى منك

ذكرى أول عراك لاثبات الرجولة؟
كنا نسرق من العمر لحظة
...و نبقى لحظة
من عبق الأيام الأولى

...نسائم الحرمان
حقيبة لمغادرة الوطن
وأخرى صغيرة من أجل النسيان

فاذا رحلت بعيدا, فضلا
...لا تأخذنى معك

14 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

W 3AWDA QAWYA !!!!!!!!

Masha Allah

ya basha welcome back!!

you know..when you decribed departure here..it was as if you eradicate some deeply rooted plant... you have to sacrifice, do concessions.. and leave wounds...!


wtg begad ya3ni

:)

4:16 PM  
Blogger hebaz said...

wow
what a strong departure declaring your return...
hoping you don't depart and to keep all your good memos with no need to get things wiped away

5:16 PM  
Blogger Maat said...

حقيبة لمغادرة الوطن
وأخرى صغيرة من أجل النسيان

no need to tell you how much i love this post.. if i'm to be more percise yeb2a i like the use of words, i like the meaning behind, i like the idea, i love that line i chose, and i like how it ended!

eh el 2araf dah?!

10:52 PM  
Blogger Memo said...

ra2ea2a awy elklmat dih
bas aih dah danta tel3t fnan kibir ba2a we a7na man3rfsh
ta7iatshy

12:14 PM  
Blogger RaiNdrOps said...

Totally in looooooove with it..gamdaa mooot

11:32 AM  
Blogger hOby said...

that was a hit!
masha2 ALLAH expression short termed yet very deep in meaning :)

4:09 PM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

نسائم الحرمان
حقيبة لمغادرة الوطن
وأخرى صغيرة من أجل النسيان
but I guess I'll need a large one for the "need to forget" memories!!

gr8 one, u excelled in everything,..words, meaning,...and straight to the heart and mind!
*CONGRATULATIONS*

11:58 PM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

epitaph:
yasalam 3aleek, raf3a ma3naweyaty keda dayman wALLAHi...loadsa thnx gal

hebaz:
elblog menawar ya fandem :D
"wat a strong departure declaring ur return" i like that

maat:
ana 3aref aslan, etla3y enty bas menha :P

memo:
a7'eran sharafteena betal3etek elbaheyya???
shamem ree7et tarya2a bas eshta

raindrops:
Willkommen, Willkommen
first visit, hopwe it's not the last
liked ur blog 3ala fekra

hoby:
bashmohandeza o7'ra ahy "sam3any ya memo"
feenek yabenty we feen aradeeky, mo7'tafeya 7'ales enty..thanx tab3an men hena lelsob7

hurricane:
my man, glad that u liked it, bgad..asl kan lessa fe e7bat men 3ashar da2aye2 bezabt :D

12:22 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

اذا ذهبت بعيداً ... مش هاخد نفسي معايا ... هحاول يعني

10:42 PM  
Blogger Esmeralda said...

اول زيارة لمدونتك
كلام بسيط فعلا بس جامد
:)

3:32 AM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

abd elrahman:
e7em, ana mafhemtesh

esmeralda:
ahlan ahlan beeky
we ya rab matkonsh ela7'eera

2:17 PM  
Blogger frozen love said...

eh ya wad el7lawa de..ana 2retha before bs bcomment b3d 10 yrs b2a

nsa2m el7rman...ya slam 3lek..7lw ya sh2e2 wana rg3t lelblog tnay

9:01 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

it has a nizar qabany style, it feels like a song for magda elroumy kaman , i like it alot :)

12:25 AM  
Blogger Radwa Lotfy..(Rodirock) said...

قد أذهب بعيدا
ويقتلنى قبل حراكى الندم

لانفى عذابى هناك
و أتخلص من الألم

ما أصعب الدموع
فى الوطن
والحياة وسط العدم

لو لم ترغبوا الرحيل
فسلوا قلبا ظلم

I wrote these words as an asnwer of wut u said , I really felt it , but in the same time sometimes we just have to leave , even if we know that we're leaving our souls behind , but when ur dying and there is no way out of ur tomb, we just look for our life , even if by visiting another tomb!

10:43 AM  

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