Friday, June 23, 2006

بلا رجعة

...و اذ أجلس جوار جسدها المسجى
أسكب فى أذنيها كل كلام الحب الذى لم أستطع قوله من قبل
أهمس لها بشوقى الدفين
...أهمس لها بكل عذاباتى السابقة
أحكى لها كم بكيت هذا اليوم الذى ظللت صامتا فيه
كم بقيت ألوم نفسى على حماقتى و ترددى
...و اذ أجلس جوار جسدها المسجى
أنتظر ردا لن يأتى ابدا
تسقط دمعتان من عينى و أنا أودعها
لتذهب, بلا رجعة

23 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

i liked this post too much, actually too much to find the right comment.. one of the few times in my life when i can't find the words.. congrats, u figured out a way to make me shut up :)

7:52 AM  
Blogger Veeeva said...

that's really powerfull ... i loved it bs bardo it'd have been better if it were a bit longer...coz details help in building a mental pic..

1:04 PM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

insomniac:
loool...um really sorry for shutting u up -means alot to me :P-...and thnx alot

still breathing:
never thought it was that powerful, still -as u say- i lack details...bas i said b4...um not used to writing in arabic still...actually um not used to writing stories

1:11 PM  
Blogger Maat said...

I don't wanna sound boring....and I hate saying things keda without explaining why or how, bas i really really like this post!!!

keep up the good work. :))

4:23 PM  
Blogger كلمه said...

aeh yad el7alawa de???? gamda gamda gamda elteneen .... heya 3agabetny esra7a bas 5ana2etny shwya .... 5aletny 2a3ed odam elpc bta3 de2teen met3asef :D

2:24 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

WoW! I am taken...impressed..and out of words...may be it's short..yet...it is full of emotions..quite intensified! WoW! indeed...mahsa Allah)) touch wood! :D

2:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

:)

3:12 PM  
Blogger N said...

That was beautiful

10:13 AM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

oh..thnk u dear
and thnx for passing by
and btw, wat's that 'france/egypt' thing????

2:40 PM  
Blogger N said...

I work and live in France, and i go home to Cairo every few months, and i balance two lives but am not completely settled in either...

4:02 PM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

graduated four years ago???
wow, u're 25 then..sa7???
too bad that u cant settle in either walla u got used to it???
seems ennek 'ateela' bardo online ;)

4:08 PM  
Blogger N said...

hehehe, ana 2ateela online bil nahar dayman coz i'm at work, with too much spare time on my hands sometime.
Yeah, I'm 25, almost 26.

About the not settling in thing, I love both, and here's pros is there's cons and vice versa. I enjoy both, bas el wa7ed 3omro mabeyeb2a unwinded wi settled kedda, it's a wierd feeling..

4:39 PM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

aham 7aga ennek kewayesa..
talama u're not home sick wala alienated hena then its okay
btw, wat do u do for living???
and welcome to the club of el2otala :D

9:06 PM  
Blogger N said...

Thank you :)
I market and sell for a living, then engineering base helps, but i've never worked as an engineer since i graduated!

9:30 PM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

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11:44 PM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

well, i wanted to b a carpenter or have a record store :D dunno if i'll make it
seems en hena bardo is turning into a chat room
bas i've got nothing else to say ya3ny, and that doesnt mean enny medaye2 :)

11:46 PM  
Blogger N said...

Chat room chat room, 3ady ba2a, spare time makes you innovative.
Carpenter, gamda di! I've always wanted to do my own carpentry, bas ba3d putting IKEA furniture together fehemt en el mawdoo3 mesh baseet awy.

12:02 AM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

e7eeeeeem...belnesba le enny mesh 3aref aslan eih howa IKEA...does that make me ignorant?? 8-|
frankly i dunno, but i think carpentary is way better than being a civil engineer
sa7ee7 enty konty gam3et eiihhh???

2:32 AM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

kay um sorry, ana 3ereft eih howa ikea...we yaretny ma3reft :'(
7elw awyyyyyyy
screw mifco 7elwan :D

2:34 AM  
Blogger N said...

Lol. Ana asfa, ana bardo ma3reftesh IKEA gheir lamma geet Faransa, bas el wa7ed sa3at mesh beyakhod balo...

9:51 AM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

ALLAH yesam7ek ya n,
i was searchin the yahoo images for ikea and there was those porn images everywhere and i really dunno y...ahly were all around...akeed 2alo 3alaya rege3t morahek tany

12:53 PM  
Blogger N said...

Hehehehe... oops, sorry?

2:59 PM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

yeah you should b :D

3:01 PM  

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