Peace Within
anger rage within
rememberin every sin
tryin to b free...
wat did he see?
slamming every door
breakin through the walls...
wat did he see?
there by the sea
and still all the people are so far away
and still every thing changes
nothing will ever stay
and um sittin there reminiscing every day
crossin every line
nothin was ever fine
was it really me?
who was there by the sea..
killin every need
waitin untill i bleed
tryin to break free
will it ever be
and still the truth of fear is so far away
and still every thing changes
but the pain will always stay
and u and me -my friend- are now in separate ways
and now that the truth is near
nothin's still clear
rememberin every sin
tryin to b free...
wat did he see?
slamming every door
breakin through the walls...
wat did he see?
there by the sea
and still all the people are so far away
and still every thing changes
nothing will ever stay
and um sittin there reminiscing every day
crossin every line
nothin was ever fine
was it really me?
who was there by the sea..
killin every need
waitin untill i bleed
tryin to break free
will it ever be
and still the truth of fear is so far away
and still every thing changes
but the pain will always stay
and u and me -my friend- are now in separate ways
and now that the truth is near
nothin's still clear
posted by Elsede3' at 2:26 AM
9 Comments:
nice.. i really like it
crossin every line
nothin was ever fine
was it really me?
who was there by the sea..
GOOOOOD one sedegh, i like the whole thing..... u should start posting crap for a change, zehe2t men repeating my words ya3ny.
another cut up technique?
makes me feel like watching the sea aimlessly, and thoughts r like the tide..just when they become near and obvious, they go back..and away !
gr8 ya sadeeky.. :)
ah sa7ee7...
u can post some crap for maat men nefsaha :P
and still the truth of fear is so far away
and still every thing changes
but the pain will always stay
and u and me -my friend- are now in separate ways
what can i say?....the truth is so far dear friend..i liked it so much
no matter fe3lan how close truth is..
bardo nothing's still clear!
el kam line dool sum a lot..
o7ayeek..
mm..floating..sinking..floating..sinking..etc
truth is far..truth is near..nothing's still clear..
ur words just "ba7ron 7'edam"
good jop..
um sorry all that um not replying this time, but...
this 'poem' -or watever u call it-, means alot to me...
and that person i was talkin about -may he rest in peace- wasn't that close, still he'll always have that special place in my memories..
so i think that any words i'll say will be, u know...
i know um not making any sense, but sorry again
and now that the truth is near
nothin's still clear
Sometimes the truth is not clear!! Ironic yet very true, it confuses the world more and more.
I like the whole thing ALOT:)
heeeeeh ana el comment rakam 10
kalamak mo2aser w mo3aber
wana 7a2i2i mo3gaba beh :D
well.. ummm... will anything ever be clear?
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